Documentary Annotation

BBC Newsnight

Documentary Analysis1 - Ross Kemp on Gangs in Jamaica.

‘Ross Kemp On Gangs-Jamaica’

The Documentary That Will Be Analysing Is

Second Draft Of Newspaper Advertisement.

As i have become more familiar with photoshop i have produced a second draft of my newspaper advertisement taking into consideration of the feedback i received.

Feed back i received : 

• The picture is not clear that it is school children because of the effect.
• The font colours don't really compliment the picture colours.
• The font of the website and date is not big enough.
• The time of when the documentary is going to be aired is not on it and neither is the HCTV logo.

So taking into consideration the feedback i got; here is my second draft, although i am not too sure about it, as i am thinking of changing it up.

As you can see i have took consideration of the feed back. I took off the effect which i think makes it more obvious that it is young people in school uniform. I added the time and the HCTV logo, i made the fonts of the website and date slightly bigger, and i changed the colour of the fonts, which in my opinion looks better now. However i think i am going to change my idea as i think i can be a little bit more creative with it.

First Draft Of My Newspaper Advertisement.

The project i am working on for my coursework requires me to create a newspaper advertisement , which relates to your subject matter, which in my case would be 'Contraception'.

So i have been trying to familiarise myself with photoshop as this will be the software i would have to use in order for me to create an effective newspaper advertisement. In the process of trying to work my away around photoshop, i came up with my first draft. However to see what i have done wrong and right i am going to show it to a couple of people within my target audience to get some feedback so i can improve it.