As i have become more familiar with photoshop i have produced a second draft of my newspaper advertisement taking into consideration of the feedback i received.
Feed back i received :
- The picture is not clear that it is school children because of the effect.
- The font colours don't really compliment the picture colours.
- The font of the website and date is not big enough.
- The time of when the documentary is going to be aired is not on it and neither is the HCTV logo.
So taking into consideration the feedback i got; here is my second draft, although i am not too sure about it, as i am thinking of changing it up.
As you can see i have took consideration of the feed back. I took off the effect which i think makes it more obvious that it is young people in school uniform. I added the time and the HCTV logo, i made the fonts of the website and date slightly bigger, and i changed the colour of the fonts, which in my opinion looks better now. However i think i am going to change my idea as i think i can be a little bit more creative with it.
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